Fat Ugly Spider
A couple of my Elementary students wanted to try this…they had fun!
100 Word Challenge: Week #24 You have five words that MUST be included in your writing so you can use 105 words only! The words are: Carefully Fifty Spider White Pushed
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One day I went to see my fat ugly spider . My mom gave me $50 yay !!!!!!!!!!!. I know so cool right. I carefully walked inside the school. Miss. Ely cot me I said good morning Miss. Ely she smiled and gave me a spacing I cried mommy help me then she gave me 999 spacing waaah. I said I hate you miss. Ugly. Then she started crying like a little baby. I started teasing her one day then she cried mommy really loud that the hole school herd she pushed me and threw Wight snow in my face. Then I started to cry.
by Isabelle
March 23rd, 2012 at 5:18 am
Well done i really enjoyed learning about your day! but mabye next time you can cheak your punctuation!!!